Once more...

[rhu]

A while back, I asked your opinion between two options for laying out page 34 of my siddur. Opinions were roughly evenly divided, along the same lines as my own indecision. I tried to split the difference, and that produced unanimity --- no one liked it.

So now I have a new possibility. (This one is a little underproduced, but it's what I have time for tonight between scrubbing refrigerator shelves.) Please let me know your thoughts about

One, Two, Three, and the new candidate, Four.

Thanks!

(PS - This is one of the last remaining roadblocks preventing the second round of galley proofs.)

Comments

I still prefer #1

[thedarkages]

#1 gives me a clearer path for my reading than the others. It makes it clear that the weekday and Shabbos texts are parallel, literally.

[gingicat]

I like choice 4 provided all of the English text from choice 1 is included.
Ranking: 4, 1, 2, 3.

[vettecat.livejournal.com]

#4 is much easier to look at - nice and clean.

[gnomi.livejournal.com]

I'm still liking 1 the best, with 4 next.

[cellio]

I think I voted for #2 before but this time #1 struck me as better. People are inconsistent. :-)

I think any of 1, 2, and 4 would work well. Are there other places in the siddur where you have two versions and, if so, are they side-by-side (as in 1 and 2) or one above the other (as in 4)?