As you may recall, I have been working on a text for
Al ha-Nisim for
Yom ha-Atzmaut. Since last year, I have had the benefit of meeting with Prof. Ruth Langer, an expert in liturgy, and she gave me some excellent advice and helped me rewrite it from scratch.
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